I like idea #8! I think idea #3 is a little hard to understand through comic form, possibly show the hamster escaping or able to easily slip through the cage bars? I also like descriptions 7 + 10!
Descriptions: I like the idea of #2 and 4, but i think overall there can be more of a conflict/resolution to these stories. They are good themes to start with, but now we can push the story even more.
(What conflict does that character(s) get into and how is it resolved in the last panel)
Sketches: I think the stories are a bit hard to follow too, but I would say #8 makes more sense then #3
I like idea #8! I think idea #3 is a little hard to understand through comic form, possibly show the hamster escaping or able to easily slip through the cage bars?
ReplyDeleteI also like descriptions 7 + 10!
I like the descriptions for 2 and 6
ReplyDeleteI think 8 could be funny, especially if the look on the persons face when they noticed is like REALLY shocked lolol.
ReplyDelete#3 and #7 are great!
ReplyDeleteI think 3 is my favorite!
ReplyDeleteReally like description #7 and idea #8!
ReplyDelete4 and 7 would make great comics
ReplyDelete2 and 4 are my favorite concepts
ReplyDeletenumber 3 and 6 are my favorite!
ReplyDeleteDescriptions: I like the idea of #2 and 4, but i think overall there can be more of a conflict/resolution to these stories. They are good themes to start with, but now we can push the story even more.
ReplyDelete(What conflict does that character(s) get into and how is it resolved in the last panel)
Sketches: I think the stories are a bit hard to follow too, but I would say #8 makes more sense then #3
1 , 2, and 3 have a lot of clean potential, 3 is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteI like 1 and 3!
ReplyDeletedescription 3,5, and 10 have potential
ReplyDeleteI think numbers 5 and 6 would make the funniest comics!
ReplyDeleteI like 6 and 8!
ReplyDelete3 and 7 are my favorite
ReplyDeleteI think 8 could turn out good
ReplyDeleteI like 3 and 8
ReplyDeleteI like 4, 6, and 7!
ReplyDeletei love the description 1
ReplyDeleteI really like the description 2
ReplyDeleteI like 8! I think 5 is good too but it would also be funny if you include the customer looking happy but crying later when they get home
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