I really like all of these sketched ideas!! For that materialistic one you could have it take place at some kind of sore full or mannequins or dolls or something where they are plastic people. Or even a wax museum! And everyone could be hella 'fake'!! That first sketch and description is also smart
Thumbnail 1 and Descriptions 9 + 2!
ReplyDeleteSketch 1 and descriptions 1 and 3!
ReplyDeleteThumbnail 1 and descriptions 1 and 9
ReplyDeleteI really like all of these sketched ideas!! For that materialistic one you could have it take place at some kind of sore full or mannequins or dolls or something where they are plastic people. Or even a wax museum! And everyone could be hella 'fake'!! That first sketch and description is also smart
ReplyDeleteDescriptions 2 and 4 are my favorite! I think thumbnail 1 is the strongest :)
ReplyDeleteI love 1 and 8!
ReplyDeleteSketch 1
ReplyDelete2 and 7 for story!
ReplyDeletenumber 6 and 8 are my favorites!
ReplyDeleteI like 6 and 8. Clever on the man literally being thirsty in the desert
ReplyDeletelove gags 5 and 8!
ReplyDeleteThe Thirst is Real is my favorite gag, I think it just needs a little tweaking on the dialogue to make it a bit punchier.
ReplyDeleteReally love your first gag!
ReplyDeletefor the thumbnails I like 1 and for the descriptions I like 1 and 8
ReplyDelete1, 3, and 6 are super funny.
ReplyDeletethumbnail 1 and 2 are good and description 3 is funny
ReplyDelete#1 for comic is pretty good
ReplyDeleteFor the written descriptions: #2 in addition to "thirst is real" is funny!
I like number 5 and number 10
ReplyDelete8 and 9, specially 9 was funny and unexpected
ReplyDeleteI love the first thumbnail the best!
ReplyDeleteI really like 2 and 6
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