Friday, March 12, 2021

Week 6 - Kyle Jereza: Thumbnails, Matrix, 10 Ideas


 



23 comments:

  1. HD look interesting and funny, just not too sure what happens on the second act.

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  2. All of your sketches are funny but the clown balloon one has got to be my fav. The 1rst and 6th descriptions are also really good

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  3. Omg your sketches are so good. That first one made me chuckle, the thought of getting beat up by so many clowns...I didn't know we were making HORROR COMICS.

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  4. I love thumbnail 3!
    Descriptions 6 + 7 + 8 are awesome too!

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  5. I would have to choose #3 for your thumbnails. and Description 6 and 8

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  6. The clown ones are great. I think Punchline is the best!

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  7. HD (#5) is my favorite!! Number 10 sounds hilarious too

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  8. They're all pretty good. I like 1-5. 5 is my favorite.

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  9. I like 1 and 2. Great job on the thumbnail sketches!

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  10. Balloons and HD are my favorite stories, but I also like the "Burn the witch" story

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  11. number 3 is really funny both idea and drawing wise, i also really like number one about the witch

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  12. Balloons and punchline are funny ahahah

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  13. I love so many of these but Punchline and Balloons are definitely my favorites

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  14. 3 and 10 are the funniest ones to me, especially with the way you illustrated number 3.

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  15. 2 and 3 are my favorite and for the thumbnails the Balloons one is a great concept

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  16. gags 1 and 3, thumbnail 2 (love how dynamic it is!)

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  17. I like 3 from the thumbnails and 8 from the descriptions.

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  18. i like Punchline and HD, but for HD it may read better if they girl wasn't excited/surprised in the first panel. Maybe if it was just showing the guy getting on one knee instead? nice job!

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