Friday, March 12, 2021

Week 6 - Azael Penaloza - Blog post

 






20 comments:

  1. I think the third one is good, it may need more context though. (But these are just thumbnails so that makes sense lolol)

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  2. I really liked your gags #2 and 7 best!

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  3. I like thumbnails 2 + 3, I do agree though that it might be difficult to show that the wizard is a DnD player.
    Description 9 is great too!

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  4. 4 and 7 would make funny comics

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  5. #7 is the most hilarious concept

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  6. Description 2 and 7

    Sketches: They all have interesting compositions, but your stories could be better. try going for 2 or 7!

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  7. the thumbnails look good, just a little more work on the story

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  8. 2 and 7 for description! 2 and 3 have good composition

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  9. Descriptions: 3 and 4 are really funny
    Sketches: Wrenching

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  10. gags 6 and 9, thumbnail 3! if I could make one suggestion, I would make the dnd wizard more obvious, maybe have him in the foreground and more outlandishly dressed!

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  11. snapping off steering wheel ;))

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  12. I like 1 from the thumbnails and 5 from the descriptions.

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